Hi, Christer:
Thanks for your review. The review comments are accepted and will be
addressed in the respin.
Please note, though, the terminology changes will result in a larger
diff between the versions.
-- Enke
On 6/12/12 8:38 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-06.txt
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2012-06-12
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-15
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of minor editorial
nits.
Major issues: -
Minor issues: -
Nits/editorial comments:
GENERAL:
Q_GEN-1: Sometimes the text says "AS number", and sometimes "Autonomous System
number". Please use consistant terminology.
Q_GEN-2: Sometimes the text says "2-octet", and sometimes "two-octet". Please
use consistant terminology.
Q_GEN-3: Sometimes the text says "4-octet", and sometimes "four-octet". Please
use consistant terminology.
SECTION 4.2.1:
Q_4_2_1-1: I suggest to replace "OLD one" with "OLD BGP speaker".
Regards,
Christer
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