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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-06.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2012-08-30
IESG Telechat date: 2012-08-30
Summary: The document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
I reviewed version -06 of this document, indicating that the document was
ready for publication. In the current version -07, new sections have been
added. I have reviewed the new and modified text, and I only have an
editorial comment (see below).
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
There is a typo in the title of Section 8.1. It says "Informative
References", but I guess it should say "Normative References", because
the "Information References" are listed in Section 8.2.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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