Hi Meral, thank you for the review and comments! All of them will be fixed as you suggested, in the next rev/submission. Thanks again!
-hadriel On Aug 24, 2012, at 12:16 AM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > Sorry for re-sending. The first attempt seem not working. > > ________________________________________ > From: Meral Shirazipour > Sent: Friday, August 24, 2012 12:00 AM > To: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-media-loopback-22 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-media-loopback-22 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2012-08-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2012-08-23 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > Summary: > This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC, but I > have some comments. > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > [Page 4] line 5, suggestion: "that always loop incoming media back for > sessions." ----> "that always loop incoming media back for all sessions." > > [Page 6] Section 3.1, suggestion for being consistent: "compliant to this > memo" ----> "compliant to this specification" > > [Page 7] Section 3.1, 'loopback' ----> "loopback" > > [Page 10] paragraph 2, "as defined in later sections", if possible please > specify the actual Section number. > > [Page 12] line 1, "the offer must contain", please double check that this is > not a "MUST" > > [Page 13] Section 6, "from PLC" ----> "from Packet Loss Concealment (PLC) > algorithm " > > [Page 15] , please add Figure caption under the header format. > > [Page 15] suggestion: "same clock rate MUST used " --missing be--> "same > clock rate MUST be used " > > "Loss RLE report block" ----> "Loss Run Length Encoding (RLE) report block" > > Also > -please run for section ##, and when referring to specific section use > capital S in Section. > -please spell out first occurrence of acronyms. > > > Thanks, > Meral > > > > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
