Hi Miguel, Thank you for your review and comments. Is it possible for you to provide an example MIB so that we can use that as reference and incorporate corrections as suggested by you.
Regards, Amit -----Original Message----- From: "Miguel A. Garcia" <[email protected]> Date: Tuesday, January 15, 2013 7:07 AM To: Luigi Iannone <[email protected]>, "Gregg Schudel (gschudel)" <[email protected]>, Amit Jain <[email protected]>, "Victor Moreno (vimoreno)" <[email protected]> Cc: Brian Haberman <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, General Area Review Team <[email protected]> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08 >Resending, now expanding some addresses that were giving trouble. > >On 15/01/2013 15:44, Miguel A. Garcia wrote: >> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) >> reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ >>at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may >>receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08 >> Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]> >> Review Date: 2013-01-15 >> IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-21 >> IESG Telechat date: >> >> Summary: The document is ready for publication as an experimental RFC. >> >> Major issues: none >> >> Minor issues: none >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> - I have not reviewed Section 7, because I won't be able to make >> technical comments, and it is quite extensive. >> >> - The IANA considerations section could be slightly clear. It should >> contain the request to IANA to allocate a value to the lispMib object >> identifier, rather than be hidden in an Editor's note that is to be >> removed prior to publication. Additionally, it is not clear which >> subregistry IANA has to use to allocate a value. The draft refers to the >> "mib-2", but I guess the formal name of the subregistry is "SMI Network >> Management MGMT Codes". This subregistry should be explicitly named. >> Furthermore, the registration is missing how IANA should populate the >> "Name" and "Description" of the entry that IANA should give to this MIB. >> >> /Miguel > >-- >Miguel A. Garcia >+34-91-339-3608 >Ericsson Spain _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
