Hi, Meral, Thanks so much for your feedback! -- Please find my comments in-line...
On 01/29/2013 03:55 AM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . [....] > > Nits/editorial comments: > > [Page 3], Section 1, paragraph 2, sentence 2 --suggestion--> Refer to > "[RFC3971]" when SEND is being mentioned the first time.(even though > mentioned in abstract) > > [Page 6], paragraph 3, --suggestion--> put "(CPA)" right after > "Certification Path Advertisement messages" I will apply the suggested edits to the next rev. Thanks! Best regards, -- Fernando Gont SI6 Networks e-mail: [email protected] PGP Fingerprint: 6666 31C6 D484 63B2 8FB1 E3C4 AE25 0D55 1D4E 7492 _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
