Hi,
  Thank you.

Best Regards,
Meral

-----Original Message-----
From: Fernando Gont [mailto:[email protected]] 
Sent: January-29-13 8:30 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03

Hi, Meral,

Thanks so much for your feedback! -- Please find my comments in-line...

On 01/29/2013 03:55 AM, Meral Shirazipour wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> .
[....]
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> [Page 3], Section 1, paragraph 2, sentence 2 --suggestion--> Refer to 
> "[RFC3971]" when SEND is being mentioned the first time.(even though 
> mentioned in abstract)
> 
> [Page 6], paragraph 3, --suggestion--> put "(CPA)" right after 
> "Certification Path Advertisement messages"

I will apply the suggested edits to the next rev.

Thanks!

Best regards,
--
Fernando Gont
SI6 Networks
e-mail: [email protected]
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