I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-roll-p2p-measurement-09 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2012-02-05 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2012-02-07 Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None Minor issues: Section 5: An Intermediate Point MUST discard the packet with no further processing if the received MO is not a Measurement Request (i.e., T = 0). It wasn't clear to me at first why the Intermediate Points are not supposed to see the Measurement Replies. I gather this is because the RPL control message used to send the reply uses a global or unique-local address instead of a link-local address. It may be worthwhile calling this out explicitly in Section 2 when you describe the two new RPL Control Messages. Really, the Replies do pass through Intermediate Points but they are not processed because they are not addressed to the Intermediate Point. Right? Nits/editorial comments: Section 1: situations, where SHOULD BE: situations where Section 5.3: and the route accumulation in on SHOULD BE: and the route accumulation is on _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
