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Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-18
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2013-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-07
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard.
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative reference.
The whole document is about passing URIs and they are not defined anywhere.
In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397).
In the same section I see:
o Section 3.3 IANA registers acceptable location URI schemes (or
types) for use by this specification. Clients MUST reject URI
schemes not currently registered in IANA.
The last sentence looks wrong. Firstly, you already restrict the list of
acceptable URIs to the list specified in Section 3.3. Secondly, what
does this requirement mean exactly? Is the client required to fetch the
list of registered URIs from iana.org (I hope not)? I suggest just
deleting the last sentence.
In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references.
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