At 04:40 PM 2/7/2013, James Polk wrote:
At 04:53 AM 2/7/2013, Alexey Melnikov wrote:
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-18
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2013-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-07
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a
Proposed Standard.
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative
reference. The whole document is about passing URIs and they are
not defined anywhere.
which RFC would you like me to reference?
Thanks to Barry (pointing me towards RFC 3986), this one is now done.
In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397).
done
In the same section I see:
o Section 3.3 IANA registers acceptable location URI schemes (or
types) for use by this specification. Clients MUST reject URI
schemes not currently registered in IANA.
The last sentence looks wrong. Firstly, you already restrict the
list of acceptable URIs to the list specified in Section 3.3.
Secondly, what does this requirement mean exactly? Is the client
required to fetch the list of registered URIs from iana.org (I hope
not)? I suggest just deleting the last sentence.
removed
In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references.
done
James
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