I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-housley-rfc2050bis-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20130420 IETF LC End Date: 20130514 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 9 page 6: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 3 page 3: (more for the RFC Editor) the word "IANA" should be the first of the page 4, not the last of page 3. - 7 page 6: IMHO it is the right place to add a reference to the RPKI (i.e., how the security considerations are implemented) - 9 page 6: I give to SM the opportunity to get his full name in the document... Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
