Thank you for the review, Francis! Russ, I assume you will collect these (and other) editorial issues and issue a new version when the time is appropriate.
Jari On Apr 22, 2013, at 3:36 PM, Francis Dupont <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-housley-rfc2050bis-01.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20130420 > IETF LC End Date: 20130514 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - ToC page 2 and 9 page 6: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments > > - 3 page 3: (more for the RFC Editor) the word "IANA" should be the first > of the page 4, not the last of page 3. > > - 7 page 6: IMHO it is the right place to add a reference to the RPKI > (i.e., how the security considerations are implemented) > > - 9 page 6: I give to SM the opportunity to get his full name in the > document... > > Regards > > [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
