Vijay: thank you for the review, the Gen-ART reviews are very important for me. And Qin: Thanks for the prompt response and a well-written document. I plan to ballot a "No objection" position for this document in the coming IESG telechat, based on this review and my own quick look at the document.
Jari On Apr 23, 2013, at 10:19 AM, Qin Wu <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi, Vijay: > Thank for your valuable review. See reply inline below. > > -----Original Message----- > From: Vijay K. Gurbani [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Friday, April 19, 2013 11:13 PM > To: [email protected] > Cc: General Area Review Team; Romascanu, Dan (Dan); Shida Schubert; Gonzalo > Camarillo > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-burst-gap-discard-13 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-burst-gap-discard-13 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: Apr-19-2013 > IETF LC End Date: Mar-15-2013 > IESG Telechat date: Apr-25-2013 > > This document is ready as a Proposed Standard. One minor comment and > one nit below. > > Major: 0 > Minor: 1 > Nits: 1 > > Minor: > - S2.1, the sentence, "A packet that arrives within this time window > but is too early or late to be played out or thrown away before > playout due to packet duplication or redundancy shall be regarded as > discarded." is hard to read and parse. > > > Clearly, if a packet arrives early, it will be buffered. Just as > clearly, if a packet arrives too late to be played out, it will be > discarded. Maybe you should break the offending sentence into two > separate sentences, one dealing with early arrival and the other > with late arrival. > > [Qin]: Agree and will split. > > Nits > - S1.1, last paragraph: s/in[RFC3611]./in [RFC3611]./ > > [Qin]: Good catch, thanks. > > Thanks, > > - vijay > -- > Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent > 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) > Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected] > Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
