I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20130625 IETF LC End Date: 20130701 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - title page 1: for Run Length -> for Run Length - ToC page 2 and 9 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: take benefit of the first "Extended Reports" to introduce the XR abbrev - 1 page 3: expand the RR abbrev (not well known according to the RFC Editor list http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt and BTW has at least 3 different meanings :-) - 1 page 3: RLE is well known (so you can keep it!) - 1 page 3: playout > play out (according to my spell checker...) - 3 page 4 (still the spell checker): recaps Thanks [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
