Hi, Thank you for the comments, responses inline.
Cheers, Varun On Jun 27, 2013, at 7:28 PM, Francis Dupont wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics-05.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20130625 > IETF LC End Date: 20130701 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - title page 1: for Run Length -> for Run Length Ok. > > - ToC page 2 and 9 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments Ok. > > - 1 page 3: take benefit of the first "Extended Reports" to introduce > the XR abbrev It is in the title, but I've expanded it at first occurrence in text. > > - 1 page 3: expand the RR abbrev (not well known according to the RFC Editor > list http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt > and BTW has at least 3 different meanings :-) > Ok. > - 1 page 3: RLE is well known (so you can keep it!) > It is expanded in the title, but I expanded it at first occurrence in the text. > - 1 page 3: playout > play out (according to my spell checker…) In multimedia we often use: playout buffer, playout delay. But in this case playout is acting more as a verb instead of a noun. Anyone else have an opinion about this? > - 3 page 4 (still the spell checker): recaps > recaps is an informal word, I can replace it. recaps -> describes > Thanks > > [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
