I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-emu-crypto-bind-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20130722 IETF LC End Date: 20130724 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - headers page 2: the keyword section is in the headers (vs the body). This is not the usual place... (BTW it is not the first time I do this comment so either the policy is different than I believe or there is a draft skeleton with this in it?) - Toc page 3 and 7 page 22: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 3.2.4 page 14: IMHO it should be fine to have an informational reference about EMSK (my idea is to help people to add it in design from the beginning). - 4.2 page 17: edition problem? in: should require mutual authentication be present in the session. to accomplish this, implementations including channel binding or - 5.2 page 19 (at the end of the line) EAp- -> EAP- - 5.2 page 19: my spell checker has a concern with "interoperably" Thanks [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
