Hi Jari, I have seen the comments and I have no objection to incorporating the suggested edits. I have avoided doing that to date, following the advice to wait for the responsible AD before submitting any new versions.
Joe On 2013-08-12, at 13:15, Jari Arkko <[email protected]> wrote: > Peter: Thank you very much for your (re)review. Authors, have you seen the > comments? > > For what it is worth, I have placed a no-objection ballot for this draft. > (Largely based on this review, because I'm on vacation and have less time to > do my own review, which I would normally do at least briefly.) > > Jari > > On Aug 11, 2013, at 7:52 AM, Peter Yee <[email protected]> wrote: > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >> >> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a >> new version of the draft. >> >> Document: draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05 >> Reviewer: Peter Yee >> Review Date: July-07-2013 >> IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013 >> IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013 >> >> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational >> RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] >> >> This review is the same as the IETF LC review of this draft, which remain >> unchanged for the telechat. This draft defines DNS Resources Record Types >> for encoding IEEE 802 EUI-48 and EUI-64 addresses. Potential privacy issues >> with this scheme have been soundly beaten to death with extreme prejudice. >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits: >> >> Page 1, Abstract, 1st paragraph: After "e.g.", append a comma and delete an >> extraneous space before "Ethernet". >> >> Page 3, Introduction, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "This" to "These" >> and change "specification defines" to "specifications define". >> >> Page 3, Introduction, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after "e.g.". >> >> -Peter Yee >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
