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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-10-18 IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-18 IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-24 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I do have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: Overall the draft was a bit hard to read but given the long time it has been around I presume it has passed implementers' test when it comes to clarity. Here are a few comments: -[Page 1], Asbtract: A sentence is missing between 1st and 2nd sentence: it should say what is the problem with the fact stated in the 1st sentence. -[Page 5], typo, "accomodate"-->"accommodate" (two occurrences) -[Page 11] section 3.2.2. "the the server-PI "----> extra "the" -[Page 17], Section 3.3 "or otherwise chooses not conform" --> not clear what is not conform -[Page 18], Section 4, not clear what this sentence means: "a server implementation MUST treat an additional HOST command that was sent before a user has been authenticated as though a previous HOST command was not sent. " Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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