Hi Martin, On Tue, 2013-10-29 at 09:36 -0700, Martin Thomson wrote:
(some text skipped) > > [Authors] We summarize what the document is defining in the > > Introduction: > > > > " This specification defines extensions to the Proxy Mobile IPv6 > > protocol for allowing mobility support to the mobile networks > > attached to a mobile router. The mobile router can request the > > mobility entities in the Proxy Mobile IPv6 domain for one or more > > delegated IP prefixes using DHCP Prefix Delegation extensions > > [RFC3633], or through other means such as static configuration, or > > access technology specific mechanisms." > > That's higher level than I was hoping for. This says "extensions" > without specifying what those extensions are for. It's a small thing, > but you only need to say that you define an extension parameter for > carrying prefix information in proxy binding update and proxy binding > answer messages. [Authors] We will add some additional text in -12 to address your comment. [...] > >> Expand acronyms. > > > > [Authors] Which acronyms are you referring to? in the text or in the > > figure 2? > > The figure. [Authors] PBU and PBA will be expanded in the figure in -12. Thanks! Carlos _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
