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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-09.txt
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2013-11-27
IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-06
IESG Telechat date: Unknown

Summary:  The document is almost ready for publication as a
informational RFC.  I raise minor concerns that should be resolved
before IESG evaluation.

Minor Concerns:  

In section 3.2.1, the document references RFC 6722.  I think it would
be better to reference the Tao web page.

In section 4.1.1, I would reword the last sentence.  I suggest: "The
authors also do one last review of the document immediately prior to
its publication as an RFC to ensure that no errors or formatting
problems have been introduced during the publication process."

This document references a bunch of I-Ds.  Since all of the references
are informative, it would be helpful to know if this document ought to
proceed to publication or whether it should wait until these I-Ds are
published as RFCs.


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