Hi Russ, I have now update the draft. I hope this addresses your comments.
Cheers Magnus On 2013-11-28 00:08, Russ Housley wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-09.txt > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review Date: 2013-11-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-06 > IESG Telechat date: Unknown > > Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as a > informational RFC. I raise minor concerns that should be resolved > before IESG evaluation. > > Minor Concerns: > > In section 3.2.1, the document references RFC 6722. I think it would > be better to reference the Tao web page. > > In section 4.1.1, I would reword the last sentence. I suggest: "The > authors also do one last review of the document immediately prior to > its publication as an RFC to ensure that no errors or formatting > problems have been introduced during the publication process." > > This document references a bunch of I-Ds. Since all of the references > are informative, it would be helpful to know if this document ought to > proceed to publication or whether it should wait until these I-Ds are > published as RFCs. > > -- Magnus Westerlund ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Ericsson AB | Phone +46 10 7148287 Färögatan 6 | Mobile +46 73 0949079 SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: [email protected] ---------------------------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
