I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-stox-core-07 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 12/9/13 IETF LC End Date: 12/11/13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 1. Please expand XSF at first occurrence 2. It would be good to find some other wording for 'This document inaugurates a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'. For example 'This document provides information for a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications' _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
