On 12/9/13 10:11 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.
Hi Dan, thanks for the review! > For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-stox-core-07 > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review Date: 12/9/13 > IETF LC End Date: 12/11/13 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: > Ready > > Major issues: > None > > Minor issues: > None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. Please expand XSF at first occurrence Ack. > 2. It would be good to find some other wording for 'This document inaugurates > a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'. For example 'This document > provides information for a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications' How about s/inaugurates/provides the basis for/ ? Peter -- Peter Saint-Andre https://stpeter.im/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
