Hi Alvaro, The text you suggest looks good :)
Regards, Christer Sent from my Sony Ericsson Xperia arc S "Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <[email protected]> wrote: On 11/28/13 2:05 PM, "Christer Holmberg" <[email protected]> wrote: Christer: Hi! Thanks for the review! >As an outsider, it is a little difficult for me to get a picture of >exactly how the document updates RFC 5820. Would it be possible to add a >few words to the last paragraph in the introduction. Something like: > >"This document updates [RFC5820] by describing the use of the MANET >interface in single-hop broadcast networks, by blah blah blah, blah blah >blah, and blah blah blah." How's this? "This document updates [RFC5820] by describing the use of the MANET interface in single-hop broadcast networks, which consists of its simplified operation by not requiring the use of Overlapping Relays as well as introducing a new heuristic for smart peering using the Router Priority." Thanks! Alvaro. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
