I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 28 November 2013 IETF LC End Date: 17 December 2013 IETF Telechat Date: N/A Summary: The document is well written, but with one minor issue that the authors may want to consider addressing. Major Issues: None Minor Issues:
As an outsider, it is a little difficult for me to get a picture of exactly how the document updates RFC 5820. Would it be possible to add a few words to the last paragraph in the introduction. Something like: "This document updates [RFC5820] by describing the use of the MANET interface in single-hop broadcast networks, by blah blah blah, blah blah blah, and blah blah blah." Editorial nits: None _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
