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Document: draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03.txt
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 14 December 2013
IETF LC End Date: 23 December 2013
IETF Telechat Date: N/A
Summary: The document is well written, and the document is almost ready for
publication. Below I have a minor editorial comment.
Major Issues: None
Minor Issues: None
Editorial nits:
Section 1 (Introduction):
The first sentence begins with:
" The IETF has standardized..."
I don't think that's needed.
I suggest to simply say something like:
"The TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of
Lots of Links) protocol [RFC6325] provides optimal
pair-wise
data frame routing without configuration in
multi-hop networks with
arbitrary topology."
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