Hi Christer, Thanks for this review. See below.
On Saturday, December 14, 2013, Christer Holmberg wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> > > Document: draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03.txt > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > > Review Date: 14 December 2013 > > IETF LC End Date: 23 December 2013 > > IETF Telechat Date: N/A > > > > Summary: The document is well written, and the document is almost ready > for publication. Below I have a minor editorial comment. > > > > Major Issues: None > > > > Minor Issues: None > > > > Editorial nits: > > > > Section 1 (Introduction): > > > > The first sentence begins with: > > > > ” The IETF has standardized…” > > > > I don’t think that’s needed. > > > > I suggest to simply say something like: > > > > “The TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of > > Lots of Links) protocol [RFC6325] provides > optimal pair-wise > > data frame routing without configuration in > multi-hop networks with > > arbitrary topology.” > > OK. I see no problem with that change. Thanks, Donald -- Sent from Gmail Mobile
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