I agree.

    Mike

On 17/12/2013 14:52, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:
Dan -

Thanx for the review.
I have no objection to your suggestion. I would hope this change can be done by 
the RFC Editor.

    Les


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Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00


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Document: draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 12/17/13
IETF LC End Date: 12/24/13
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: Ready

Major issues:

Minor issues:

It may be more cautious refer to the 'latest available' version of the IS-IS
standard as we cannot be completely sure that the Second Edition will also be
the very last one. Suggested change in Section 1:

OLD:

    All references to IS-IS should be to ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
    Edition and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.

NEW:

    All references to IS-IS should be to the latest edition of the IS-IS
    standard (currently ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
    Edition) and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.

Nits/editorial comments:




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