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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-02-14
IETF LC End Date:  2014-02-14
IESG Telechat date: 2014-02-20


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some 
editorial comments .


Nits/editorial comments:
Suggestion: I noticed that Unsigned32 is used with 16 bit encoding. It could be 
good to mention it in the descriptions like other MIB documents do.
Look for "Unsigned32 (1..65535)" in the draft.


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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www.ericsson.com
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