Thanks for your review, Meral. Authors, have you taken a look at the comment on Unsigned32?
Jari On Feb 14, 2014, at 9:30 AM, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2013-02-14 > IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-14 > IESG Telechat date: 2014-02-20 > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some > editorial comments . > > > Nits/editorial comments: > Suggestion: I noticed that Unsigned32 is used with 16 bit encoding. It could > be good to mention it in the descriptions like other MIB documents do. > Look for "Unsigned32 (1..65535)" in the draft. > > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
