Hi Christer, Many thanks for reviewing this document!
We have published -07, reflecting your comment. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-tc-mib/ Please see inline for response to each. > Section 1 (Introduction): > --------------------------------- > > Q_1: > > > s/"two MIB modules"/"two Management Information Base (MIB) modules" Authors had an offline discussion about this one, and concluded that the term is sufficiently well known and modification is not required. > Section 4 (Security Considerations): > ------------------------------------------------ > > Q_4: > > The last sentence says: > > "Therefore, this document has no impact on the security of the > Internet." > > That sounds a little funny :) Wouldn't it be better to simply say: > > "Therefore, this document does not introduce any additional security > considerations." Good catch, it does sound a bit funny. We have replaced the text with what you have suggested. Thanks again! -Nobo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
