On Apr 30, 2014, at 11:39 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:

> 
> Nits and Editorial Comments:
> 
> 
> -- idnits reports: The document seems to use 'NOT RECOMMENDED' as an RFC 2119 
> keyword, but
>     does not include the phrase in its RFC 2119 key words list.


NOT RECOMMENDED is a RFC2119 keyword. The issue is that xml2rfc template does 
not include it.

- Jouni


> 
> 
> 
> -- 6.1, first paragraph: "subsystem does not need to multiple
>   multiple sessions on one socket"
> 
> I think one instance of "multiple" was intended as a different word?
> 
> 
> 

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