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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-06-23
IETF LC End Date:   2014-06-23
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some 
comments.


Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 8], Section 4.1
"the commitment of the shared resources are be coordinated"--missing 
'to'-->"the commitment of the shared resources are to be coordinated"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com
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