Meral, thanks for your review. We will incorporate your comment to the next version.
Best regards, Jeong-dong ________________________________ 보낸 사람 : "Meral Shirazipour" <[email protected]> 보낸 날짜 : 2014-06-23 16:06:04 ( +09:00 ) 받는 사람 : [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> 참조 : 제목 : Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-06-23 IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-23 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 8], Section 4.1 "the commitment of the shared resources are be coordinated"--missing 'to'-->"the commitment of the shared resources are to be coordinated" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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