Hi Alexey, These changes have been made a new version -06 has been posted.
Thanks, Donald ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA [email protected] On Mon, Aug 4, 2014 at 1:19 PM, Alexey Melnikov <[email protected]> wrote: > On 04/08/2014 18:16, Donald Eastlake wrote: >> >> Hi Alexey, > > Hi Donald, > >> On Sun, Aug 3, 2014 at 2:30 PM, Alexey Melnikov >> <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >>> >>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you >>> may receive. >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05 >>> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov >>> Review Date: 3 August 2014 >>> IETF LC End Date: 21 July 2014 >>> IESG Telechat date: 7 August 2014 >>> >>> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. >>> [Ready with nits] >>> >>> Major issues: None >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> >>> Section 6.4: who allocated opcodes? I.e. is there a registry? >> >> These OAM OpCodes were created by and originally all under the control >> of IEEE 802.1; however, 802.1 allocated the block of 32 OpCodes from >> 32 to 63 to ITU-T as documented in [802.1Q]. I don't think ITU-T >> maintains an explicit registry other than the listing of assigned >> OpCodes out of their range that appears in [Y.1731] but I could be >> wrong. >> >> Perhaps a sentence could be added to the end of Section 6.4 such as >> "These OpCodes are from the range of values that has been allocated by >> IEEE 802.1 [802.1Q] for control by ITU-T." > > I think that would be very helpful. Otherwise there is a question why there > is no IANA registry for these and your extra sentence would address that. > >>> Nits: >>> >>> I think it would be better to say that all "Reserved" fields are set to 0 >>> by >>> the sender and ignored by the receiver. >> >> I'll check with the other authors on that. > > Thank you. > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
