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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-08-22 IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-22 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 6], Section 4.1, typo: "A noted in Section 1"---->"As noted in Section 1" -[Page 6],"but each node MUST attempt to determine a loop-free path", if the only method to detect a loop is http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6073#section-7.6, then perhaps a reference to this RFC would be useful. -[Page 8], Section 5, typo :"consesus"---->"consensus" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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