Hi, Thank you. Best Regards, Meral
From: Bocci, Matthew (Matthew) [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Tuesday, August 26, 2014 3:04 AM To: Meral Shirazipour; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last review Call draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05 Meral, Thank you for your review. I agree with all your suggestions and will fix them in an updated version of the draft. Bets regards Matthew On 22/08/2014 16:33, "Meral Shirazipour" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-08-22 IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-22 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 6], Section 4.1, typo: "A noted in Section 1"---->"As noted in Section 1" -[Page 6],"but each node MUST attempt to determine a loop-free path", if the only method to detect a loop is http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6073#section-7.6, then perhaps a reference to this RFC would be useful. -[Page 8], Section 5, typo :"consesus"---->"consensus" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com<http://www.ericsson.com>
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