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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2013/10/28
IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30


Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Historic RFC, but I 
have some comments you may wish to address.

* Section 7.1

The Length field of the IP address TLV in case the IP address is IPv6 is 
not defined. It should be defined to be 18 (2 bytes for address family 
and 16 bytes for the IPv6 address)


* Address family reference

The IANA registry at 
http://www.iana.org/assignments/address-family-numbers/address-family-numbers.xhtml
 
is a much better reference for address families than the currently 
referred RFC3232 that does not contain any of the relevant information.

Thanks
Suresh




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