Hi Suresh - Thanks for the comments. I have updated the draft accordingly. /himanshu
-----Original Message----- From: Suresh Krishnan [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Wednesday, October 29, 2014 12:11 AM To: [email protected]; General Area Review Team Subject: Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2013/10/28 IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Historic RFC, but I have some comments you may wish to address. * Section 7.1 The Length field of the IP address TLV in case the IP address is IPv6 is not defined. It should be defined to be 18 (2 bytes for address family and 16 bytes for the IPv6 address) * Address family reference The IANA registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/address-family-numbers/address-family-numbers.xhtml is a much better reference for address families than the currently referred RFC3232 that does not contain any of the relevant information. Thanks Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
