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Document: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-channel-12
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Oct-29-2014
IETF LC End Date: Oct-23-2014
IESG Telechat date: Oct-30-2014
This document is ready as a Proposed Standard.
Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits: 1
Minor: 1
- S3.1, U-C 1: Why is it important to specify tha "there may be no
SRTP media channels, or all SRTP media channels may be inactive"?
It seems to me that all you care about is data channels, not
media channels. As such, retaining the last phrase ("there may also
be reliable data channels in use") suffices, no?
(Same comment for S3.2, U-C 3).
(Same comment for S4, Req. 1. This makes me wonder if I am missing
something germane here with respect to you listing the availability
or unavailability of SRTP media streams/channels. If so, please
let me know.)
Editorial nits:
- S6.4, opening paragraph:
s/One strong wish is/It is advantageous/
Thanks,
- vijay
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Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected]
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