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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa-10.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2015/01/06 IESG Telechat date: 2015/01/08 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have some minor issues that the authors may wish to address. Section 4.2.1.1: This sentence is missing a verb (reach?) The exclusion of routers reachable via an ECMP that includes S-E prevents the forwarding subsystem from attempting to <MISSING VERB> a repair endpoint via the failed link S-E. Section 4.3: The Compute_Neighbor_SPFs() function seems to be missing a check for verifying if the interface is not the failed interface. I think the following check should be added. if (intf != fail_intf) Thanks Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
