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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-08 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-02-07 IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-09 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as a Standards Track RFC, but I have some small comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 4], Section 1, last two paragraphs: Although the draft always refers to O/TWAMP, this sections says : "This document specifies a method for enabling network measurements between a TWAMP client and a TWAMP server " The reason the O/ was omitted is explained in Section 3. A sentence should be added in section 1 at least mentioning that as described in Section 3 this document is valid mostly for TWAMP. -[general]: Suggestion to spell out all acronyms at first use, even in abstract. e.g.: O/TWAMP, IKE, SA, SeGW, eNB( By SeGW do we mean serving gateway? or security GW?), AH, ESP, IV etc... Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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