On Thu, May 7, 2015 at 5:18 PM, Brian E Carpenter <
[email protected]> wrote:

>
> It seems the author didn't see my Last Call review, so this review has not
> changed.
>
>
Nope, I hadn't.  Apologies for that.


> As the writeup says, this is an update to a long document that mainly
> resolves a
> notified erratum and some oversights in the previous version's IANA
> material.
> Therefore I did not review the whole document. As far as I can tell, the
> changes
> reflect the description in the writeup. (I assume that IANA will work with
> the
> author to get the registry updates exactly right.)
>

Yes, that's already happening behind the scenes.


> Minor Issue:
> ------------
>
> IMHO the "Change History" section should be summarised in a "Changes since
> RFC7001"
> section (rather than being deleted).
>

Sure, that seems a reasonable suggestion.

Nit:
> ----
>
> 6.7.  SMTP Enhanced Stauts Codes
>
> s/Stauts/Status/
>

Fixed for next version.

Thanks!

-MSK
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