Thanks, both of you.

Jari

On 11 May 2015, at 21:49, Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> The -09 version resolves my comments completely, thanks!
> 
>   Brian
> 
> On 08/05/2015 12:26, Murray S. Kucherawy wrote:
>> On Thu, May 7, 2015 at 5:18 PM, Brian E Carpenter 
>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>>    It seems the author didn't see my Last Call review, so this review has 
>> not changed.
>> 
>> 
>> Nope, I hadn't.  Apologies for that.
>> 
>> 
>>    As the writeup says, this is an update to a long document that mainly 
>> resolves a
>>    notified erratum and some oversights in the previous version's IANA 
>> material.
>>    Therefore I did not review the whole document. As far as I can tell, the 
>> changes
>>    reflect the description in the writeup. (I assume that IANA will work 
>> with the
>>    author to get the registry updates exactly right.)
>> 
>> 
>> Yes, that's already happening behind the scenes.
>> 
>> 
>>    Minor Issue:
>>    ------------
>> 
>>    IMHO the "Change History" section should be summarised in a "Changes 
>> since RFC7001"
>>    section (rather than being deleted).
>> 
>> 
>> Sure, that seems a reasonable suggestion.
>> 
>>    Nit:
>>    ----
>> 
>>    6.7.  SMTP Enhanced Stauts Codes
>> 
>>    s/Stauts/Status/
>> 
>> 
>> Fixed for next version.
>> 
>> Thanks!
>> 
>> -MSK

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