Hello Meral, I pushed a new version with the proposed changes.
Thanks, - Pierre > Le 12 juin 2015 à 19:41, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> a > écrit : > > Hi, > That is perfect, thank you. I think since the LC was June 11 you can > publish a new version with any other comments you received from LC. > > Best, > Meral > > > From: Pierre Pfister [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Friday, June 12, 2015 7:09 AM > To: Meral Shirazipour > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of > draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06 > > Hello Meral, > > Thank you for this comment. > > Indeed, sticking too hard to the specifications, I think I forgot to > introduce the purpose first. > > I therefore propose to add one sentence in the abstract: > This document specifies a distributed algorithm for automatic prefix > assignment. Thus providing an alternative to manual or centralized > prefix and address assignment techniques. […] > > And add a new paragraph at the very beginning of the introduction: > This document specifies a distributed algorithm for automatic prefix > assignment. The algorithm provides a generic alternative to > centralized (human or software based) approaches for network prefixes > and addresses assignment. Although it does not require to be > configured to operate properly, it supports custom configuration by > means of variable priority assignments, and can therefore be used in > fully autonomic as well as professionally managed networks. > > Given a set of delegated prefixes, Nodes may assign available > prefixes to links they are directly connected to, […] > > > Do you think it helps ? > > Do you think I should publish an update immediately or wait for other > comments first ? > > > Thanks > > - Pierre > > > > Le 11 juin 2015 à 18:36, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>> a écrit : > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2015-06-11 > IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-11 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. > > > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > I found the draft a bit hard to follow as the incentive was not clear at > first. > A few sentences in abstract or introduction on 'why' we need this algorithm > and what would the 'alternatives' be would be useful. > Right now it only says 'what' the algorithm does. > > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com <http://www.ericsson.com/>
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