That would work for me. It gets in the point that the comparing entity, as well as the generating entity, needs to plan for this.

Thank you,
Joel

On 7/6/15 6:29 PM, Mike Jones wrote:
Hi Joel.  Thanks for looking this over again.  Section 3.4 was added
in response to Adam Montville's SecDir comments, in which his focus
was on cases where the hash function didn't have to be known to
multiple parties.  I guess it's only fair that you focus on the cases
where it does. ;-)

Currently the case you're interested in is covered by the last
sentence in 3.4, which reads: "Only if multiple parties will be
reproducing the JWK Thumbprint calculation for some reason, will
parties other than the original producer of the JWK Thumbprint need
to know which hash function was used."

I could strength this by making it its own paragraph, saying this:
"However, in some cases multiple parties will be reproducing the JWK
Thumbprint calculation and comparing the results.  In these cases,
the parties will need to know which hash function was used and use
the same one."

Would that work for you, or do you have alternative wording to
suggest?

Thanks again, -- Mike

-----Original Message----- From: Joel Halpern
[mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Monday, July 06, 2015 6:18 AM To:
A. Jean Mahoney; General Area Review Team;
[email protected] Subject: Re:
[Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-jose-jwk-thumbprint-05

The document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Upon  re-review, the addition of section 3.4 raises a question of
clarity.  As written, the text says that the hash function matters
only to the original thumbprint provider.  Should there be a little
bit of text talking about the need for the hash function to be the
same for thumbprints to be comparable, or, phrased alternatively,
that thumbprints with different hashes must not be compared?  If
there were no need for consistent production of the thumbprint, there
would be no need for a Proposed Standard for the document.

Yours, Joel

The new section 3.4 On 6/19/15 12:06 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background
on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-jose-jwk-thumbprint-05 JSON Web Key (JWK)
Thumbprint Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern Review Date: 19-June-2015 IETF
LC End Date: N/A IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: The internet draft is ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard.

[Note to readers: This review is provided because the spreadsheet
said so.  The draft appears not to be in last call yet. Also, this
reviewer did not attempt to second-guess the design choices made by
the WG.  The choices are well-explain, and I understand it to be
the WGs job to make them.]

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments: N/A

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