I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150710 IETF LC End Date: 20150708 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: usually there is no very explicit reference to the RFC the document obsoletes. IMHO this case could be a reasonable exception. - ToC page 3 and 18 page 25: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments (I use a US English spell checker, I am trying to switch to a UK one but both raise errors for the other alternative... I suggest to ask the RFC Editor to uniformize/uniformise the English variant...) - 1 page 3 and many other places: e.g. -> e.g., - A.1 page 29 (and other places): I have a concern about OS names, for instance I prefer Microsoft Windows to simply Windows. BTW the current offical name of Mac OS (MacOS) X is (Apple) OS X. Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
