* Jari Arkko > > When translating a packet between IPv4 and IPv6, an SIIT > > implementation MUST individually translate each IP address it > > encounters in the packet's IP headers (including any IP headers > > contained within ICMP errors) according to Section 3.3, except for > > any address for which Section 4 explicitly states that the EAM > > algorithm MUST NOT be used. > > I think this makes sense, and I at least feel this is better text > than the original. Thanks.
Hello Jari, My co-author felt the above was a bit too "conjunction-overflowy", so we ended up with the following: Unless otherwise specified in Section 4, an SIIT implementation MUST individually translate each IP address it encounters in the packet's IP headers (including any IP headers contained within ICMP errors) according to Section 3.3. This is in draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-02. I hope you see this too as an improvement over the original? Tore _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
