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Document: draft-ietf-trill-rfc7180bis-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour (was originally assigned to another gen-art)
Review Date: 2015-10-19
IETF LC End Date: 2015-10-19
IESG Telechat date: 2015-10-22
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments .
Major issues:
Minor issues:
-[Page 5], Section 1.1: this section updates section 1.2 of RFC6325. The update
is about conflict resolution between sections of the RFC.
Shouldn't this bis highlight those conflicts if any?
-[Page 14], Section 3.4. Should this section have a MUST sentence just before
the last sentence?
"All RBridges in a campus MUST determine distribution trees in the same way "
-[Page 10], Section 2.4.2.1 , gives an example, then the first bullet after the
figure explains the problem with that scenario and says "MUST NOT be locally
distributed in native form ".
Is it possible to clarify what should be done instead?
-[Page 11], last line, "forwards the packet on that tree."
Just checking if that is supposed to say "packet" or if it should say "frame"
or "TRILL Data packet"?
Naming ("frame" or "TRILL Data packet") are used throughout, but it would help
to mention the convention at the beginning of the draft.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 6], Section 1.3, "RBridge - An alternative name for a TRILL Switch."
To remain true to RFC7325, better to add Routing Bridge: "RBridge - Routing
Bridge, an alternative name for a TRILL Switch."
-[Page 15], Section 3.6 , "can implemented"--typo-->"can implement"
-[Page 16], Section 3.6.1 , "program their hardware tables",
is it assumed that TRILL fast path will only/always be HW based?
-[Page 17], "RB1 is show with three ports"--typo-->"RB1 is shown with three
ports"
-[Page 34], "then behavior is as specified"---> "the behavior" or "then the
behavior"
-[Page 35], Section 10.2.2, "those capabilites"--typo-->"those capabilities"
Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
www.ericsson.com
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