Thanks, all fine then! Jari
On 17 Mar 2016, at 08:54, Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku) <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello Jari > > The suggested changes were made and reviewed by AD and the chairs > > Thanks > Suhas > > Sent from my iPhone > >> On Mar 17, 2016, at 1:35 AM, Jari Arkko <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Thanks for the review, Meral!! >> >> Authors, have you see the suggested editorial changes? Wanted to make sure >> they are not missed. >> >> Jari >> >>> On 22 Feb 2016, at 20:19, Meral Shirazipour >>> <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >>> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >>> comments. >>> >>> For more information, please see the FAQ at >>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05 >>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >>> Review Date: 2016-02-22 >>> IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26 >>> IESG Telechat date: NA >>> >>> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I >>> have some comments. >>> >>> Major issues: >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> >>> Nits/editorial comments: >>> -[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at first use. >>> -[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with audio, video. >>> I suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if that is >>> what we want to convey. >>> -[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section 3"---->"in Section 3" >>> >>> Best regards, >>> Meral >>> --- >>> Meral Shirazipour >>> Ericsson >>> Research >>> www.ericsson.com >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gen-art mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >>
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