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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160429 IETF LC End Date: 20160429 IESG Telechat date: 20160505 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1, 4.1 page 7 and 4.2.2 page 9: i.e. -> i.e., - ToC page 2 and 2.2 page 5: variants -> Variants - ToC page 2 and 7 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2.2 page 5: software[sacm-requirements] -> software [sacm-requirements] Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
